On The Sidewalk Bleeding Assessment Activity: Who Am I?

Hello my name Bodyn Riley, I am a grade 9 student that currently attends the school St.Jerome’s. St.Jerome’s is a Catholic school located in Vermillion Alberta, this school extends from Kindergarten to grade 12. This essay is about my hopes and dreams, my strengths and talents for the future, and what I like most about myself.


To start off the essay I thought I would talk about my hopes and dreams. My hopes and dreams are pretty simple and also realistic, so I’m not going to be talking about getting a pet dragon. One thing that I really want to do is get good at chess. Chess is a very hard game to play and to master, and I don’t want to master I just want to be a good player. I’d also like a big house in my future, somewhere I can go to. Now I know what you might be thinking, but why does it have to be a big house, and I’ll tell you, because no house is too big but there can be a house too small. And the final thing is to get rich. Now there are multiple ways to be rich but I was thinking money-wise so I could go on vacation after retirement. I want to be rich so I can explore, go places, learn new things, and to get a lambo. These are all my hopes and dreams about the future, and like I said, realistic and simple.


My strengths and weaknesses are of course up next on the list with the first one being chess. I like to think that I am a well advanced chess player so I put chess as one of my strengths. Like I had said before chess is a very difficult game so to be good at it is very hard, and the fact that I have gotten good is enough for me to put it into my strengths. Another thing that I am very good at is hockey. Now I’m not very good at offense in hockey and I’ll admit that, but I am good at defense in hockey. Since I can push people to the ground without a huge struggle and poke a puck with my stick so I’d say I’m pretty good at defense.


To finish off all of this I’ll say all what I like most about myself. The thing I like most about myself is my positivity, my ability to be up even in the low times. I like to think that by me staying positive I help others stay positive.  Another thing I like about myself is how funny I am, now some people will say that I’m not funny but they’re lying.

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